CanFly Learning – Paragraph Editing

Part 4 – Paragraph Editing (Childhood Memories)

Instructions

The paragraph below contains grammar mistakes related to the Simple Present, Simple Past, and Simple Future. Find and correct each mistake.

Childhood Memories

When I is a child, I live with my grandparents in a peaceful neighbourhood.Every morning, my grandmother prepare pancakes, toast, fresh fruit, and a glass of warm milk before I went to school.My grandfather walk me to the bus stop and always tell funny stories on the way.After school, my friends and I plays games such as hide-and-seek, tag, hopscotch, and marbles.Sometimes we fly colourful kites or ride our bicycles around the neighbourhood until sunset.My favourite toys is a teddy bear, a toy train, a remote-control car, and a set of building blocks.Every weekend, my grandfather buy me sweets such as lollipops, chocolates, gummy bears, and cotton candy.During the summer holidays, we visit the local park, eat ice cream, and feed the ducks by the lake.One birthday, my parents gives me a new bicycle, and I feel happier than ever.Those wonderful memories reminds me that happiness come from spending time with family rather than using mobile phones.In the future, I share these childhood memories with my own children because I believe they teach valuable life lessons.

Rewrite the Correct Paragraph


Vocabulary Box

🎲 Games

Hide-and-seek
Tag
Hopscotch
Marbles
Kite flying

🧸 Toys

Teddy bear
Toy train
Remote-control car
Building blocks
Bicycle

🍭 Sweets

Lollipops
Chocolates
Gummy bears
Cotton candy
Ice cream

👨‍👩‍👧 Family Members

Grandmother
Grandfather
Parents
Friends

🍽 Food & Drinks

Pancakes
Toast
Fresh fruit
Warm milk

Vocabulary Recall Challenge

Without looking back at the paragraph, type as many words as you can remember.Separate each word using commas.

🎲 Games

🧸 Toys

🍭 Sweets

👨‍👩‍👧 Family Members

🍽 Food & Drinks

Your Score


✅ You Remembered


❌ You Missed


📘 Today’s New Words

💡 IELTS Grammar Tip

  • Always identify the time expressions first.
  • Every weekend / always / usually → Simple Present
  • Yesterday / last week / last Saturday → Simple Past
  • Tomorrow / next week / next month / in the future → Simple Future